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Post by bloodgoddess on Apr 14, 2007 18:42:11 GMT 10
My Dark Curse I sit alone,
in my eternal darkness.
Forever hearing the tone,
of the voices of my ancestors.
They see the things i've done,
and are disgusted
I sit here,
drowning in my tears. As true they come, my dreadful fears.
My Dark Curse,
its ugly head doth rear.
My Dark Curse,
is the one thing that i fear.
My one fear,
is to be traped here.
Here,
is the eternal darkness of my mind.
Death is my only escape. |
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Post by xaimai on Apr 19, 2007 2:17:39 GMT 10
oh wow!! that is amazing. very dark, I LOVE IT!!!!
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Post by Theristor Magika on Apr 19, 2007 10:38:45 GMT 10
Tis indeed an interesting poem... and is very dark.
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Post by bloodgoddess on Apr 22, 2007 4:19:08 GMT 10
wow now i feel all depressing but i can never write anything cheerful
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Post by Theristor Magika on Apr 22, 2007 14:40:46 GMT 10
Depressing? why should you feel that? We only said it was dark. In darkness there is the security of stasis, things don't change in darkness, or if they do you don't notice it.
I'm sure that you could write something cheerful if you tried.
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Post by bloodgoddess on Apr 23, 2007 10:54:22 GMT 10
i seriously doubt it i dont feel truly cheerful when im hyper
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Post by Theristor Magika on Apr 23, 2007 20:49:04 GMT 10
No it's not when Hyper, but when feeling elated, feeling high, and that my friend only comes when in good company, enjoying oneself. like watching a movie with friends. Going to a dance, watching the sunset, or the dawn. Howling at the moon. Abseiling.
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Post by bloodgoddess on Apr 26, 2007 10:33:10 GMT 10
its not fair
you could prolly sit down and a poem pops right into ur head but all i ever think about is....well i dunno wat it is but it sure isnt poetic
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Post by Theristor Magika on Apr 26, 2007 12:08:48 GMT 10
No Poetry isn't quite that simple... it takes grueling hours to become inspired and then further grueling hours to write it out just right... and recently I haven't had the time, and I haven't been spontaneously inspired. Which kinda sucks cause I've like a back log of 20 poems now... and it's probably only going to get bigger.
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Post by bloodgoddess on Apr 28, 2007 13:07:06 GMT 10
aww u poor thing wish i could help but im no use to ne1
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