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Post by Theristor Magika on Feb 25, 2007 14:50:38 GMT 10
I Just thought I should share the poems I keep writing with all of you, as I write more they shall be posted here. Comment as much as you like, criticisim both good and bad it good for further improvement. Though No Spamming. If you have a negative comment explain why it is so. I'd prefer that you do the same for positive comments but for them tis not needed, just a post saying their good is nice. Now my Epic WIP poem
Magic
There are dreams and Premonitions, Finding things and Definitions, Do you know just what you See, That which is Or What might be,
Fire Burns and Coals do glow, There is something you should Know, Light and Electricity Fall under Pyromancy.
Rain does fall and Rivers Flow, Watch as the tide does go. Healing is of Hydromancy, When it's not Necromancy.
Earth doth Tremble Trees they grow, so do rocks and gems you know, Natures force Druidicy, Is of Mighty Geomancy.
Air shall rise and Wind it Blows. Like life it comes and goes. both good and bad, it can be Chaotic, shifting Aeromancy.
Like all things that comes to end, the circle it begins again. life and spirit consequently Fall under Necromancy.
From the Blood disease is born In two ways it can be torn. The shape-shifters bane, Lycanthropy it's name.
Vampirism doth be the other, Of which death is it's mother. The Bloods power is great, But dire is it's grisly fate.
If one can see what truly be, Then one must feel Prophecy. to those fools I feel pity, For Will is lost to What May Be.
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Post by Theristor Magika on Feb 25, 2007 14:56:17 GMT 10
A poem I wrote for my E-sister.
Goodnight
Sleep well mine lady love. may you flutter like a dove, in vivid dreams so sickly sweet. where Sirius sweeps you off your feet
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Post by bloodgoddess on Mar 14, 2007 8:17:43 GMT 10
Sirius??? is that from Harry Potter??? well i think both are awesome
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Post by Theristor Magika on Mar 14, 2007 9:07:39 GMT 10
Indeed sirius... Now that someone has responded to this I'll post some more poems. __________________________________________ Now If you feel my poems Dark There is something else to remark They’re directed at a certain shark Unless your him, tis just a lark.
An injustice great did he make This righteous anger I do not fake Until its vengence I do slake I will sow doom within my Wake.
For many this wyrd shall not be bad Indeed for many It will be glad, Though to some It may seem sad For payback time's now to be had.
The Karmic Debt I’ll balance out and I’ll do this without a doubt even if you scream and shout I’ll make you work you lazy Lout.
The heartless bastard will soon feel His victims chains upon the wheel As it turns, my resolve I steel To make him suffer their ordeal
With one last part In this here art I will ready the first dart As the balancing does start. _____________________________________________
A friend to me, a friend to thee and the friend that's ye. I wish to summon all of these to my side from my geas I now command that you listen to your heart anew. Think upon what is right and end your needless fight. listen to what is true and to what you must do. Your blindness by ignorance shall be broken in recompense for all the things that are wrong specifically those that to you belong open your heart, open your mind, Tis truely amazing at what you find. Open the locks open the doors, in your minds many floors, become enlightened of thee, now learn what you truely be.
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Post by bloodgoddess on Mar 14, 2007 13:49:45 GMT 10
wow have you ever thought of publishing these?
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Post by Theristor Magika on Mar 15, 2007 11:02:20 GMT 10
Hmm not really no.
and here's another little poem for you.
Destiny’s circle
In a world without end, We all find our friend. For them we travel, Till the planes unravel. And the circle closes, Our final poses, Match our first. Our Thirst For knowledge Is then abridged. With wisdom, Of doom.
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Post by bloodgoddess on Mar 15, 2007 11:43:59 GMT 10
wel u should it would be awesome and yet another beautiful poem
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Post by Theristor Magika on Mar 15, 2007 18:06:35 GMT 10
Any Idea where I could do so? I'll add another poem in here when I find where I wrote it...
Who am I and why am I here there are few things that I fear Predjudice is number one I was the unwanted one Number two is alienation I work towards its abation Empathy is number three for I feel all of you as me to loose control is their base so at four is its space
The world at large has no size for we each see it through different eyes, with every person is a new world, and in their mind it is unfurled, no one person is wrong which is why I write this song.
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Post by bloodgoddess on Mar 15, 2007 23:56:25 GMT 10
no not really but im sure that if you go to a local book store and ask someone they should know
and that one is so pretty it actually took me a min to figure out
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Post by Theristor Magika on Mar 16, 2007 12:47:05 GMT 10
Twas the reign of queen rayne, Twas a rain of blood and pain, Twas the darkness again. But through all of that came a light It broke through her bitter plight. It lit up the darkened night Hope shone through to the queen A feeling such as had never been Caused another thing that was never seen A joyful smile.
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