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Post by Malice Sabishii on Apr 20, 2007 16:29:57 GMT 10
The following was made whilst I was depressed. It started off a poem but then a pulse went through and made it a song.
The Pariah.
Ever feel your soul's been staked All your friends are huge ass fakes Ever seek the blade of sin To empower the evil that's within
I'm a fucking pariah A broken messiah that fell from the sky I own the lance of desire, And with this power I'll makes hearts cry
Ever have someone turn their backs When you wanna follow in their tracks Ever have friends betray you because they think you ain't real
I'm a fucking pariah A broken messiah that fell from the skies I own the swords of fire, And with this power I'll read the ancient scries
Ever think that fate is hell. (if you want me, come and take me, If you hate me, I'll hate you) Where is the light that would rebuild. (war breaks out, we go to war, we die in vain, we mourn the slain.)
In the end people feel pain For those who died in vain We'll mourn those slain
It's my fate I'm a pariah As the people's reminder.
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Post by Theristor Magika on Apr 20, 2007 23:59:52 GMT 10
Very interesting. And a very very good piece.
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Post by bloodgoddess on Apr 26, 2007 10:35:33 GMT 10
u know i could actually make music for that well i couldnt but i could get my friends to cause i think they in a band
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Post by Reira on Jun 2, 2007 13:42:13 GMT 10
that was so wikked!!! not only should you consider putting it to music, the piece can be performed as a "spoken" poem-- recited out loud but with a certain rhythm and flow. I've heard some decent poet perform their pieces that way, and it was really amazing!! it's different from rap though =o
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Post by Malice Sabishii on Jun 2, 2007 19:39:28 GMT 10
Another poetic moment came to me so here's another.
A Vow unbroken
For pact of my soul I take up the sword the modern world exists here no law in times so dark I stalk like a shark for those to me me dear I'll protect you with no fear for me to die in no vain is to save you from the pain whilst I'm in someone's heart my sheathed blades stay sharp.
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Post by Malice Sabishii on Jul 28, 2007 9:18:05 GMT 10
here's another one. This one came from a dream I had and I ain't telling you alot about it.
The forseen dream.
In the calmness of darkness I see the world harmless. The night embraces me And everything I can see
This all sounds like a movies scene This world is my foreseen dream I'm no longer what I seem Those nearby do not scream
Please don't look at me with fear When you see my soul flare up and sear Please don't shead any pain-filled tears When you sense my fight is near
This all sounds like a movies scene This world is my foreseen dream I'm no longer what I seem Those nearby do not scream
Out my blades grow my wings So I can surf and scry the winds Please don't panic on these things I'll be returning with the win
This all sounds like a movies scene This world is my foreseen dream I'm no longer what I seem Those nearby do not scream
You hear outside a loud and heavy thud You see me covered in someone's blood And as I lie within your embrace I try so hard to see your face
This all sounds like a movies scene This world is my foreseen dream I let out a silent hollow scream Cause it was just a forseen dream.....
I know it sound morbid and dark but it was meant to be. Modern day life is very dark and depressing. everyone has to pick on those whom stand out. e.g the other day I decide to dress a little fancy so I wore my black leathr coat (which looks good on me.) and some not a very nice person in a car calls me emo when in actuality I am a bit of everything. E.g: I like the ocean, cars, partying, listening to most styles of music and play games and I like wearing black and dark blue. Just more proof that people have lost that words meaning. Emo don't mean suicidal idiot.it's an abbreviation for "EMOTIVE."
sorry to vent out there. I'm jut saying something that happened. If it offends I apologise.
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Post by bloodgoddess on Aug 1, 2007 6:44:16 GMT 10
well most people are idiots anyways and dont understand those who do not say they are apart of some group
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Post by Malice Sabishii on Aug 1, 2007 6:49:11 GMT 10
Modern societal expecations are to blame.
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Post by bloodgoddess on Aug 2, 2007 15:17:56 GMT 10
meh society itself is to blame
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Post by Malice Sabishii on Mar 6, 2008 14:11:32 GMT 10
It's been a while since I did anything so I'm gonna do another poem. Unfortunately I don't have a title for it.
I envision ambition, dreams and desires, All around me is a wild brushfire, I find something sitting in a fire, In the flames I found a sapphire,
In life I search for the gist, Though my eyes are enshrouded inside mist, I hear a serpent awoke and hissed, I know there's something I have missed,
Now I walk from the dark, I feel something in my heart, It reaches the deepest of my parts, And I see the removal of a mark,
Now I feel some fulfilled relief, Now I know of new belief, I hope this change isn't brief, A new found life with lessened grief.
Sorry if it's random but I was bored so I made this.
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