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Post by sauronp on Apr 4, 2008 15:02:47 GMT 10
all your poems are realy good!!!! you are a great writer!!! may be i can try to write something... but not so good as you he he
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Post by Malice Sabishii on Apr 4, 2008 15:08:45 GMT 10
You can certainly post some.
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Post by sauronp on Apr 25, 2008 12:26:46 GMT 10
ok heres is something that i write .... is the frist time that i wtrite something like a poem and in english... and thats because is a litle bit small he he ... so if someting is wrong dont laught to much ok..
The whisper of the wind, brings me your name. I don’t want you in my mind, it just bring me pain.
Sometimes I can hear your voice, I close my eyes and I can see your face. But I don’t know why I feel rejoice, of finding you in every place.
I see you in my dreams, and find you in my thoughts. I want to be cover by your arms, Even if you are the reason of my tears.
I can’t have you e near, And I can’t live away from you. You are all what I want, You are all that I hate.
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Post by Malice Sabishii on Apr 25, 2008 13:16:32 GMT 10
It's very impressive for a first attempt. You got talent Vicky San. Alright time for a new poem from yours truly. rebirth to battle. I awaken in the rain my body full of pain my plans were to be gained before my soul was slain amongst a puddle I look at my eyes then my face is full of surprise I feel power on the rise my opposition shall demise With time I've been reborn I find my nemesis in a storm now my fate takes up form we shall battle from dusk to dawn Through the elements the fight goes on in the battle's way shall there be noone and over time my power will be gone I fight this battle to protect someone After the fight I struggle to stand for the battle was long and grand I bare many scars like cursed brands those around me begin to understand what it's like to be one who is damned.
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Post by Malice Sabishii on May 13, 2008 23:03:57 GMT 10
Okay, here's something slightly different to the usual stuff from me. It's still a bit random and no I have no title for this either. Though it came after thinking on some things after waking from a dream.
I stare into a shimmering star, And here I know it is so far, There is space, there is distance, there is time, I realize that this effort shall make me unbind, Life at times can be really surreal, The things that one understands and feels, My mind relaxes and find some peace, Most things can be organized and neat, To some though it can be blue and beat, After the trials and after the tests, I rise up aspiring to be the best, I look around and see, I walk forth with no fear, How can all this be, I realize now that I am a seer.
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Post by Malice Sabishii on Aug 12, 2008 0:10:27 GMT 10
I thought of this one for Erin and how she struggles with her feelings and her heart. I hope you all like.
Forbidden.
For what seems like eternity, I wanted you to be with me, I look at you from afar, In my eyes you are a star,
I desire your forbidden love, To be held within your arms, To soar like a pair of doves, With you I feel no more harm,
Frightened of you rejection, I await to give my confession, When you look over to me, I feel my soul within fantasy,
Because of all my fears, My deepened feelings remain hidden, But when I know you're near, I wish my feelings weren't forbidden,
I'm fighting this shyness away, (I want my fears unwritten, for this love is forbidden.) When you're gone my heart begins to cry, (come to me, comfort me, kiss me, love me.)
When I saw you for the very first time, My heart fluttered and my soul began to fly, My angel, my love for you has been forbidden, Inside your eyes, there's passion that's hidden.
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Post by Malice Sabishii on Oct 2, 2008 21:07:23 GMT 10
New Poems/lyrics from yours truly. Based on someone I hold extremely dear.
Angels.
From the skies I saw something fell When I approached I saw an angel Her beauty was quite a sight. She awoke and looked in my eyes. I felt my soul smile full of delight. After years of suppressed cries.
Meeting you was pre-made destiny The much needed cure for my tragedy Within your arms I find sanctity You're my sacred god sent angel the one who saved me from my Hell
Her hair has a transcendent shine Her smile makes all become fine Her touch fills me with unearthly desire Her kiss makes my heart burn like fire
On a destined day I stand with my angel In the ambiance of wedding bells To be with her through time and space In her embrace I find the ultimate peace.
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Post by slaughteress on Oct 7, 2008 14:17:23 GMT 10
Aaw! Those poems are amazing!
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